Tuesday, 2 December 2014

Assignment 4: A sense of place

November 2014


Assignment 4 A sense of Place



This assignment draws together all the learning from the previous exercises and the appreciation of what buildings and spaces mean to the people who live amongst them. The aim of this assignment is to produce enough images to fill a six page, intelligent, thoughtful travel publication (not touristic). In total 12 photographs are to be chosen with 6 to be selected as a first choice.

Whilst working through the set of exercises for part 4, I moved around through various locations fairly close to home. In part 2 of this course, I encountered issues of feeling uncomfortable with photographing in my home town of Mansfield. I gained in confidence during part 3, and put it to the test again in part 4. At the beginning of the exercises I still felt uncomfortable and sensed that people regarded my actions as suspicious (I think because it is a town of high unemployment and benefit claimants) so I decided to use my local city to “hide” and work through a period of self-development, gaining confidence with street photography. Eric Kim wrote an article published by Digital Photography School which I found very helpful, suggesting that if one stood in the middle of a road junction, no-one would take any notice of that person, which put photographing people without asking them into perspective for me. Having looked at the idea of basing this assignment in Lincoln because I could hide behind the mask of a tourist, I felt I would get more out of the assignment by challenging myself and using Nottingham which I know equally well. The point of decision came when I was asked if I would be willing to take some photographs for a friend who is writing for a winter sports magazine of Winter Olympians in Nottingham.

The essential character of Nottingham

I held my own opinions of the character of Nottingham and to test whether these were similar to other peoples, I discussed them with a number of work colleagues. I was interested to note that how one views Nottingham and what one associates with depends on social class and sex. Men tended to look at the buildings from the outside whilst women saw it as a place to socialise, meet friends and shop. Not everyone went out to eat in Nottingham (only those who were more affluent or going with work colleagues.) Nottingham is famous for the legend of Robin Hood, and the tourist attraction closed in 2009 (5 years ago). It seems that since then, Nottingham entered a period of decline with shops and businesses closing down fairly quickly. Last year the city ran a project to fill 20 shop windows with exhibitions in an attempt to make the shopping area more enticing to consumers. University and student accommodation buildings are now on the increase along with the redevelopment and modernisation of two shopping centres and zones are being created such as the Lace Market (Cultural Quarter) and Sneinton Market (Creative Quarter).

I see the redevelopment in a positive light. Nottingham has been the founding home of huge companies such as John Player Tobacco, Boots Pharmaceuticals and Raleigh Bicycles. Nottingham’s history involves  lacemaking in cottage industries and within the city, Robin Hood and the Sherriff of Nottingham are world class fictional characters and sporting legends such as Jane Torvil and Christopher Dean, Carl Froch and Brian Clough have over the years captured the lives of many and put Nottingham firmly on the map. Nottingham is proud to present two long standing football teams (Nottingham Forest and Notts County), a National Cricket Stadium (Trent Bridge), National Water Sports Centre, Nottingham Panthers Ice Stadium as well as concert venues such as Capital FM Arena and Rock City. Fashion designer Paul Smith also comes from Nottingham. We boast two Universities; Nottingham Trent University and The University of Nottingham. More recently we had a visit from Batman as Wollaton Hall became Batman’s home in The Dark Knight Rises, and tourists can find the village of Gotham not too far away. Nottingham has a lot to offer to investment companies, students, tourists and locals alike.

The Council House boasts two art deco lions; Leo and Oscar. Leo is the Left Lion, and one of the cultural magazines sports this name. The Left Lion is a well-known meeting place for people of all ages. The Old Market Square, the largest in the country, holds food fairs, shows, Christmas Markets, the Seaside in Summer for children and political demonstrations. At lunchtime, workers and visitors alike can be seen sitting around. This is where the youth of today meet. The fountains (redesigned from old public toilets) provide a playground for toddlers to teenagers whatever the weather.  Nottingham has several buskers, but none replace the memories of the Xylophone Man who always played outside C and A and died 10 years ago. A petition was started to ask NET to name a tram in memory of him. Nottingham also has its own religious informers who have the same spot outside Marks and Spencers. Nottingham, like most cities, has its own dialect, although this is harder to capture in photographic form.

What I set out to achieve

I started off with quite negative thoughts towards this assignment.  Having read around street photography and visited the exhibition at The University of Nottingham on American Night Photography (see exhibitions page on my blog), I was left wondering how to present this positively. Nottingham is trying to move with the times to upgrade the derelict areas and attract more people in. However, I feel that money is not always spent in the best of ways such as the closure and redesign of a public space at great cost to the taxpayer within 2 years of a makeover.  Change is always going to be there – some people see is as positive, some as negative such as the stall holders of Sneinton Market who are unhappy that their market is going to be turned into a gaming area. There are less affluent areas, and gun crime is high, so for my own safety I planned to stay in the safer areas. Nottingham is a large city and if I took images of certain buildings, I would waste space on a “snapshot of Nottingham’s buildings”. I narrowed my area of Nottingham to within a 1 mile radius from Left Lion, in the Old Market Square of Nottingham. This encompasses several of the landmarks of Nottingham that people use and or associate with.

I drew up a list to carry with me to look at certain aspects.
My list of suggested shots:
Citycard Bike hire long shot towards city
Left lion across market square (busy people)
Trams up South Parade (side of council house flying horse walk) – busy traffic
Park Tunnel (city of caves) – single person? steps
Sneinton Market redevelopment no people
Busker / Religious informers
Nottingham Trent University (Newton Building) Students (group) small and many
Nottingham Playhouse (Sky Mirror) / Broadway Cinema (people anonymous) silhouettes in windows
Maid Marion Way (legend of Robin Hood without using the statue)
Exchange Walk or Kings Walk (shopping)
People in coffee shops (or outside)
Groups of picnicking people in market square
People at tram stops
Ice arena

I planned my images to be bright and colourful to attract people to visit. This meant underexposing slightly to make the colours more saturated to add colour to the cold, grey winter season. Puddles would be acceptable and add another dimension for reflections. Christmas lights may be unavoidable and I wanted lots of people to show Nottingham being busy. Nottingham has worked hard to incorporate a continental feel with cafes extending their seating to outside, but I didn’t think I would capture this at this time of year. I wanted a sense of scale and to show off Nottingham’s better side.
I used the same camera throughout (Canon 5D mark 2) with the same lens (24-105mm) to capture wide angles, height of buildings and a tripod for the night time images. I used a variety of portrait and landscape and spaces where captions could be added.

I wanted to make people feel that they could associate with the people of Nottingham, even if it was to say “I behave like that” or “that looks like …..”

My images
Having taken about 400 images, I narrowed my choice down to 22. Having formulated my own ideas of which ones to use, I took them into work to discuss with some work colleagues to see whether the images said “Nottingham (not touristic)” to the people of Nottingham.


Discussion took place around whether Robin Hood was a landmark or a tourist attraction.
It features as a photograph in Debenhams coffee shop along with an image of Trent Bridge (not the cricket ground) and so it could be seen as a landmark. The definition of a landmark is something which “marks a site or location” and as it is next to the castle, I see it as a tourist attraction rather than a landmark.

Set 1

Set 2



Why these sets are organised as they are
Set 1 tells a story of what is happening in Nottingham, from what the city council wants to showcase (the posh shopping centre and lit up council building) to our more creative side (knitted bicycle stands and the busker) and what the real people get up to. Set 2 provides an alternative couple of images such as the cinema at night and what’s really going on behind the scenes (Sneinton market buildings being regenerated and people in alleyways.) The 2 people shopping are down a pedestrianized street showing Ted Baker and Hollister on one side to the British Heart Foundation on the other. The religious speaker shows how people keep a wide berth and on a busy shopping day, this space is not being utilised to its full potential.


1/80 f8 ISO800 24mm
Inside Exchange Arcade – a Grade 2 listed building which stands at the head of the Market Square. Built in 1927, it has retailed for 85 years. It is joined to the council house (used for civic ceremonies including weddings) and the dome (at the back of the image) houses a bell called Little John which claims to be the deepest in Nottingham and can be heard up to 7 miles away. Nottingham’s two shopping centres are both undergoing renovation. This is more exclusive housing designer shops. One feels one has to be dressed appropriately to enter the building. The clientele have money to spend. The visitor would not find a group of teenagers hanging around in here.
The building is light and airy with a glass domed roof making it feel cathedral like. It was important to capture the sense of space and height, lighting and smartly dressed people. The people show the scale of the building. I was unsure of the photographic policy of this building so I handheld the camera although it would have been better taken on a tripod. I used a high ISO to obtain a fast shutter speed and I think the amount of grain is acceptable. By standing slightly off centre the building is not symmetrical, and shows the direction of travel of the  shoppers. The building is busy, but not as busy as the other shopping centres. The people are not recognisable on their own as they are small in proportion to the building and there are several of them.

1/30 f8 ISO400 24mm
This image captures the creativity of Nottingham’s Creative Quarter. Geographically the creative quarter encompasses Sneinton (will be home to a five storey video games exhibition in conjunction with Nottingham Trent University and the Science Museum), the Lace Market – centre of the lace making industry during the days of the British Empire and Hockley (where this image is taken). The tall Victorian buildings (one of which was owned by Jesse Boot founder of Boots of Nottingham) are home to the alternative shops such as gothic and vintage clothing shops with a number of bars and restaurants with outside seating. This image shows different coloured knitted covers to the bike racks which I think express creativity. The two passers-by on the left hand side of the image have shown an interest in what I am looking at. They are motion blurred making then less distinctive. The day was cold and misty depicted by a trail of cigarette smoke. The bikes added a splash of colour to the image. Nottingham’s winter deal for the lime green city cycles is to make them free to borrow which is a great idea, and meant they were not at the locations which I had planned to capture them so this was my alternative idea. Nottingham is home to Raleigh bikes so bikes had to feature on one of my images.

Todd Hido (2014)(p20) suggests that when one is photographing space, “it is useful to use the perspective to draw the viewer into the frame. The diagonal line creates depth, and depth often works well in describing an environment. The diagonal lines extend your photograph into infinity.” I discovered this was true when photographing the space inside Southwell Minster, and one can imagine how the line of buildings looks going off to the left. I also believe that in this instance, repetition of the buildings fools the brain into repeating the pattern. This does make the space look larger.

1/100 f8 ISO640 45mm
Low Pavement (above) used to be one of the main coaching routes in Georgian times. The last white building on the right hand side towards the centre of the frame was the old assembly rooms. All the buildings are listed and several contain caves as basements. The point at which I am standing is the main thoroughfare through the designer shops and links to the second shopping centre and the Lace market. Jamies’s is marketed as family friendly dining so I included the child in the image. I had hoped to capture alfresco dining, but the time of year was against me. However, people do look at restaurant menus. I like to think of Nottingham as becoming more multicultural and inviting people to have the opportunity to sit outside.

The two red telephone boxes have become a landmark for the people of Nottingham. This image shows that Nottingham is not flat. It also illustrates the mix of modern and old buildings which can be an eyesore or urban infill depending ones views on architecture.

1/40 f8 ISO400 58mm 
Whilst in Nottingham, most people come across the street busker. I wanted to capture the loneliness of this chap and people’s attitudes towards him.  This image hopefully captures the tension surrounding him. In this image, the lady on the right is waiting for someone. She may hear his music but she is not watching him. The lady on the left is marching straight past him pretending not to notice him. The other people are already on their way out of the picture. His violin case did not have many coins in and this image was taken at 3:19pm. A higher vantage point would have helped capture the lack of money. (I was below him and the walkway goes uphill). The image would be better if it included more of the lady on the left. She was on the edge of the frame and my image needed straightening slightly. This was an image where I had to demonstrate quick reactions. I saw something and acted upon it.

1/50 f8 ISO400 75mm
Friar Lane, Nottingham has nothing to do with the story of Robin Hood and Friar Tuck. One may be excused for thinking that the two are linked, given that its location is fairly near to the castle. The name comes from the Carmelite Friary (visited by King Henry 8th), although no trace of the building remains. To me, this image shows the real Nottingham; kids sitting on the pavement waiting for a bus, exhausted shoppers, and behind the bus stop is Chocolate Utopia which in my opinion looks dirty and unappetising. Even the silver birch tree has been chopped down leaving a tall stump.

0.6secs f8 ISO400 50mm
This is my favourite image. Nottingham’s Council House dome is lit up for occasions such as Children in Need, Nottingham Night Light and as part of the Christmas decorations. The colours change and unless I take several images, I cannot guarantee what colours I will have on the image.  I was pleased with the blue lighting which is both masculine and emotional. I mounted the tripod on the edge of the fountain which was above head height and stood in a trough of water, waiting for the man on the left to stand still. Fortunately he did, and the people with him moved away from him. The man is balanced by the lights on the right hand side and the hint of Christmas decorations on the left sets the time of year. Separating the image from the reflection are a group of people enjoying themselves on the temporary skating rink. I liked the fact that the man has long hair and a carrier bag. When I analysed this image on the computer, I decided could see more about it than when I took it. It told a story of a man looking at the Christmas lights and wondering about the expense of it all. I thought it was quite reflective (contemplative) as well as the reflection adding to the “stop still and think” notion I was trying to convey. I was inspired to revisit night photography after seeing Todd Hido’s work at the University of Nottingham this month and reading his book.

Set 2

1/80 f8 ISO500 24mm
The statue of Robin Hood was gifted to the City of Nottingham in 1952 by a local businessman to “provide something tangible for visitors to see relating to Robin Hood” (http://www.experiencenottinghamshire.com/discover/robin-hood-statue-p586071) accessed Nov 2014. The sculptor based his work on historical references. It caused controversy when first exhibited as the citizens expected to see a piece of work based on the 1938 Errol Flynn movie entitled The Adventures of Robin Hood. Robin Hood is now located outside the Castle walls which befits the legend. The statue certainly draws the tourists and people queue to have their photograph taken next to it.

The statue stands on a narrow concrete plinth about 2 feet high and becomes very slippery during the wet weather. Without a step, I found it difficult to balance on such a narrow plinth and take the image. The image could be better if there were less tourists around (e.g. on a weekday) and if I had carried and used a step (which was impractical). The tourists in the image are small and many, making them unrecognisable. It gives a sense of scale to the image, although not arranged brilliantly.

1/125 f8 ISO500 55mm
This image of Bridlesmith Gate from a low perspective captures most of the reflection of the two shoppers in the puddle. The designer shops are mixed in with one charity shop. The buildings along this stretch are a real mix of old and new. The man with a Moss bag hurrying through the shoppers adds movement to the image. I found a photograph taken by Francis Frith in C1950, in which the shop front of Coast onwards on the left hand side look similar. In those days the road still had cars travelling along it.



1/80 f8 ISO400 32mm
Sneinton Market through the eyes of the developers was an interesting perspective.  I came face to face with a security guard! People of Nottingham recall Sneinton Market selling all sorts of things that you couldn’t buy elsewhere during their childhood. It is part of Nottingham’s heritage with buildings dating from the 1930’s. There has been a market here since 1860 and it was always seen as important community space – not only the buildings here but the open plan market square too. The square has undergone considerable redevelopment – turning it from a car park in the 1990’s to a square with colour changing fountains in 2014. On the recent occasions that I visited, the space was occupied by 3 sellers determined to hold a market although people just use it as a place to walk through on their way to the city centre.

The day I took this image the day was foggy and cold – in keeping with the run down area. I think the fact that it is boarded up with a skip outside suggests that work is happening and although there are no workmen in the image, it still looks like work is imminent. Evidence of constructive human activity is shown.

1/30 f8 ISO400 32mm
Like the busker, the other type of person who people of Nottingham talk about is the preacher who stands outside Marks and Spencers. Sometimes there are more than one, and sometimes he has a board. By taking an aerial perspective on the pedestrianized street, I was able to see that people were giving him a lot of clearance and not paying him any attention. It occurred to me that this space was under-utilized.  The people are unrecognisable as there are many of them, with some taken from behind and others have motion blur. The bright coats and few leaves add some colour to the image.

1/13 f5.6 ISO200 105mm
I came across this image of a man sitting at a table looking at his phone down an alleyway whilst walking around Nottingham Playhouse. Nottingham has a lot of alleyways or twichells (Nottinghamshire slang), some with shops and some without. I was unsure if he was connected to the Playhouse and just having a break from working. I assumed by the shadows cast the man had additional lighting on. He is partly obscured by the stair case leg. I think the clutter in the background and the uneven paving add to the character of the building. The man contrasts well against the brighter background. The beer barrel in the foreground helps to set a place to the image.

1.6secs f13 ISO200 24mm
The Cornerhouse cinema complex (opened in 2000) houses a collection of eating establishments, a night club and crazy golf. When it first opened, visitors used to spend time going up and down the escalators to look at the view of the city. Standing on the outside at night time watching the traffic drive past, one has the feeling that people are in such a hurry. People who are not local remember this building on their drive through the city centre. I like the people positioned at the pedestrian crossing, showing that they are waiting for the traffic lights to stop. The streak of the bus going past with the cars suggests that the area is busy with people coming or going. I think the night shot adds an air of mysticism to the image.

Initially, I had wanted to include silhouettes of people in the windows. Hido (2014) (p26) made me question whether this was necessary or whether it was better to let people draw their own conclusions on what was/had happened. Hido explains that “what’s not shown is of more interest. It activates the senses.” I now agree with this and questioned whether it mattered how many people were on the bus, or what the people in the Cornerhouse building were doing.

How well I think I succeeded
My original plan had been to look at taking images for an overseas business brochure. I narrowed down my images to include a group of students outside the university, a scene with people including a bank in the image, transport (bikes / buses / trams), eating out, wealthy shops and people enjoying themselves. I looked at a few examples on the internet and the use of bright sunny days made these images more cheerful and saleable. Realistically to achieve this in October / November was going to be very weather dependent, and unfortunately on my planned photography days the weather was cold, wet and misty. Fortunately the time of year was great because at weekends the city came alive with so many visitors and Christmas shoppers that I times I thought I had too many people to choose from!

Conversely, some of my planned shots were unattainable due to the Christmas Market. I had planned the left lion juxtaposed in front of a mock Tudor shop front. On the occasions I visited access wad denied as the Christmas Market was being set up or once up, it was too cluttered.

Attending the exhibition on American Night photography encouraged me to extend the time spent in Nottingham and look at early evening nightlife, although at 6pm blue flashing lights constantly drove up and down the city centre roads. I benefitted from knowing the city. To include local colloquialisms, I had considered using a derelict railway grain storage warehouse on a piece of wasteland which was within my mile of the city centre which has Nottingham slang graffiti painted on it. I think this would be a good future project which I contemplated but the thought of being unaccompanied due to the structure of the building and its current use were enough to stop me from visiting alone. There were enough people I encountered sleeping in doorways and next to cars in the more run down parts of the city. My list of places to look at helped save time and also meant I could plan a rough circular route. 

How I might have approached the assignment if there was no end result in mind
I think my images would have been more about the buildings than the people using them if I did not have and end goal in mind. The assignment was good for focussing my mind, and once I became absorbed into the subject, I became more confident at capturing images without worrying what people might think. Am I done with this subject? I am happy with the outcome for the purpose of the assignment as what I want to take will not happen until after Christmas when the lights and market stalls are taken down. By then there will be less people around and the weather will still be unpredictable. I think this will be a case of carrying a camera around with me when I go out and about. The exhibition by Hido came just at the right time for me to open my eyes and make me take note of the world around me. I can now see how I could do the assignment differently using other places Hido (2014) (p62) suggests that “That’s when you’re done: when you’re not compelled to shoot the subject anymore.” I still feel I have more places and people to explore and so I can associate with this quote.

References
Hido, Todd (2014) on landscapes, interiors and the Nude, aperture publishing, New York p20
Hido, Todd (2014) on landscapes, interiors and the Nude, aperture publishing, New York p26
Hido, Todd (2014) on landscapes, interiors and the Nude, aperture publishing, New York p62
Bibliography
ALHS N, 2009, Newark through time, Amberley Publishing, UK

Hido, Todd (2014) on landscapes, interiors and the Nude, aperture publishing, New York

Freeman, M (2014) Capturing light, The heart of photography, Ilex press, Lewes, UK

West, J (2001) Memory lane Newark and District (Memory Lane) Breedon Books Publishing co ltd Guernsey

Eric Kim, Digital Photography School http://digital-photography-school.com/10-tips-for-the-aspiring-street-photographer/ accessed October 2014

Sunday, 30 November 2014

Making figures anonymous

3rd October 2014

This exercise looks at using different techniques for making people unrecognisable and less prominent. The aim was to take two to four images for each method.

At the beginning of the exercises of part 4, I still felt uncomfortable and sensed that people regarded my actions as suspicious (I think because Mansfield is a town of high unemployment and benefit claimants). An article I came across written by  Eric Kim in Digital Photography School suggested that if one stood in the middle of a road junction, no-one would take any notice of that person. I gave it a go and it was correct - no-one noticed. This put it into perspective for me.


Small and Many

In the first image, the people are too big. The lads are too noticeable. The viewer doesn't really get an idea of the sense of scale of the place. In the final 3, the people become anonymous. As time went on, the numbers of people increased, and especially in Nottingham it was hard to tell in camera where one group started and another began.

1/90 f8 ISO400 EFL134mm Mansfield
1/320 f8 ISO160 98mm (5D) Nottingham
1/80 f8 ISO100  38mm (40D) Nottingham
1/60 f8 ISO100 EFL38mm (40D) Mansfield

Facing away
In both these images, the people are anonymous as they are facing away from the camera. The girl's blue hair is replicated in the doors of Primark.
1/60 f8ISO100 EFL168mm (40D) Mansfield
1/200 f8 ISO 640 35mm (5D) Nottingham
In silhouette
The group of people walking towards me are in silhouette. Apart from the direction of their feet, the viewer would find it hard to distinguish which way the shoppers are facing. I struggled to find shadows of people on walls due to the time of year and misty days.
1/45 f8 ISO400 EFL168mm (40D) Mansfield
1/1250 f6.3 ISO400 99mm (5D) Southwell

Partly obscured
In image 1, the lady is hiding behind fabric on the market stall making her face and torso obscured giving her anonymity. The mirror in image 2 shows people who don't appear in the image which adds interest to the photo. Image 3 has people obscured in the bus shelter reflection. The joins in the mirrored panels on the hotel obscure the people making them unrecognisable.


1/30 f8 ISO400 EFL93mm (40D) Nottingham
1/45 f8 ISO400 EFL 168mm (40D) Nottingahm
1/60 f8 ISO400 EFL38mm (40D) Nottingham

1/60 f8 ISO100 105mm (5D) Nottingham
Motion blur
Image 1 shows a shopper in motion blur. She has become quite unrecognisable. The people in image 2 were caught in the reflection of the hotel. The angle distorts them and the motion blur makes them unrecognisable. In image 3, I looked at capturing people without heads to emphasis their feet outside a shoe shop.

1/15 f8 ISO100 12mm (Canon Powershot G11) Nottingham
1/15 f8 ISO100 73mm (5D) Nottingham
1/20 f8 ISO400 EFL134mm (40D) Nottingham

Bibliography
Eric Kim, Digital Photography School http://digital-photography-school.com/10-tips-for-the-aspiring-street-photographer/ accessed October 2014

Busy traffic

8th October 2014

Mansfield

First I tried this exercise in Mansfield. I spent time watching the flow of traffic. It wasn't really very busy though so I did this again in Nottingham with much busier traffic. 
Mansfield 1/60 f8 ISO100 70mm
In image 1 the shoppers were nicely spaced out and the view of their backs were not obstructed by any poles.

Mansfield 1/90 f8 ISO400 47mm
In Image 2 the shoppers are more clearly visible. People are in a hurry, checking watches and phones. The shoppers walk in all directions managing to avoid each other and the purposefulness of the shoppers makes it easy to get around without bumping into others.


Nottingham

Nottingham by comparison was much busier and the patterns different. Larger groups of people were out shopping and socialising. I aimed to show the busyness of the market square. The temporary market stalls attract people, and it was interesting to watch the number of people around the stalls change. The people in the foreground made a difference to the busyness too. When there was no-one in front of the the people were lost in the general market scene. 

Nottingham 1/750 f8 ISO200 35mm
Nottingham 1/250 f8 ISO100 24mm
Nottingham 1/250 f8 ISO100 67mm

A single figure small

3rd October 2014

A single figure small



Nottingham Playhouse Theatre has a sky mirror which appears on the tourist attraction signposts. Early October was still fairly warm so the parasols were in place detracting from the reflection in the mirror. 

As I walked around the corner towards the theatre I was surprised to see this chap having coffee. He was sufficiently far away from the mirror so as not to be in the way of the mirror. His back is towards the black wall and being back lit adds contrast and makes him appear more noticeable. He is placed off centre and looking into the frame, giving the viewer an indication of the distance between him and the foreground (sense of scale). In the scale of this image, the sitter loses his identity.
1/125 f8 ISO100 105mm

Response to Tutor Feedback Assignment 3

September 2014


Overall Comments

I was pleased with the overall received comments received from my tutor:

"quite a comprehensive assignment and I can see you have worked hard on the research of each building which has led to a good selection of images that take into account the respective buildings’ history and use. Your choice of buildings is good as each one offers quite a challenge to the photographer, you have taken your audience into consideration and have produced a range of shots that inform and illustrate." Tutor September 2014

Feedback from Assignment 3

Nottingham Railway Station – My tutor felt that I had captured the "overall design aesthetic of the station" and its alterations making it better for the customer in images 1 and 2. In Image 3 (platform) my tutor suggested that perhaps should have people in the empty foreground to draw the viewer into the image. I understand that people would look better in the image. This is the kind of shot that is probably difficult to repeat because of the positions of the trains, although I will bear the comment in mind for future reference (such as the market square in Nottingham). With image 4, I hoped to photograph someone walking down the stairs on the same side as me, and when people saw the camera they changed staircases. I had been informed by the station that I was not to capture the staff on the platform. At times it felt that at times there were more staff than travellers.


Papplewick Pumping Station – I thought hard about how to show the scale of this building so I was pleased that my tutor thought I had represented the scale. One area I did not show was the man shovelling coal. The reason behind this is that I really struggled to get a good exposure. The chap was moving fast and standing in a very dark area with sun coming through the glass roof, I burnt out the wall behind the chap. Had I have managed a decent exposure, I would have included this shot.  


1/30 f4 ISO400 28mm
For my final photograph of this building I chose an image to show the cavernous underground water storage reservoir. I appreciate that using a tripod would work better but time was limited as the tour guide kept us moving. 

Southwell Minster – My tutor thought these images showed the atmosphere well. I was pleased with these too, especially as I would normally have taken the image of the altar from a front facing view. Trial and error showed me that this position I adopted worked well and I was interested to note that Todd Hido (2014) (p20) suggests that when one is photographing space, “it is useful to use the perspective to draw the viewer into the frame. The diagonal line creates depth, and depth often works well in describing an environment. The diagonal lines extend your photograph into infinity.” My tutor liked the interaction in image 4 between the visitor and the building. 


Powell, M (2014) Sails Ahoy, Good Taste the magazine from  Select
Lincolnshire, Autumn/Winter 2014, Issue 20, Warners, Bourne

Photographs possibly Andrew Tryner
Green’s Mill – My tutor thought that this was another good choice of building and although I had shown the outside of the building, it could have been more dynamic. I wasn't quite sure how to do this until I was given a copy of a magazine showing Heckington Mill in Lincolnshire undergoing restoration. This had a dynamic image of the exterior of the mill. Once the weather is reasonable, I will try this again. I like the photo opposite as the sails, cap and brickwork contrast against the sky. The angle of the mill makes it appear much taller. 

The Collection – I was happy with the images showing the collection, and agree that image 3 of the museum using the the under floor space did not work as well as I had hoped. Also, on looking again, image 4 does look like the exhibits, although what I had tried to show was the was way the space was used and lit.  


Belton Orangery – My tutor commented that the exterior shot was good and gave the viewer an idea of the buildings location. The following three images were portrait orientation and taken that way because the view was tall and narrow. I felt they worked better that way . I am mindful of the fact that my natural instinct is to shoot in portrait mode and made a conscious effort in Assignments 4 and 5 to use a mix of both. Image 4 was my favourite image which I have had printed large and I am still pleased with it. 

Learning Log / Blog / Suggested Reading / Viewing Pointers For The Next Assignment

Adding extra navigation made my bog easier to use

To do:

Use a separate page to critically engage with other photographers work 

Further reading:


This is a holiday made up of photoshopped images by Dutch photographer Zilla van den Born who fooled her  parents and friends by sending them postcard images and posting on Facebook to make them believe she was actually on holiday. 

I was impressed at her photoshop skills and I think this is where planning an assignment in meticulous detail really helps. She had researched details such as time zones so she knew when to post on Facebook. The other question it raised was how believable it was - she fooled her family and friends and once the scam was revealed they were shocked that the images were not true. Self obsession is evident as she features on all the images and they are about her. I think the images are more creative than a holiday of selfies as van den Born has considered different poses, scale in relation to the building / landscape and  lighting.   Would she have got more out of actually taking the holiday? I am not sure. In my opinion, this must have been what she wanted to do because 5 weeks is a long time to pretend you are on holiday for.

"I did this to show people that we filter and manipulate what we show on social media, and that we create an online world which reality can no longer meet. My goal was to prove how common and easy it is to distort reality. Everybody knows that pictures of models are manipulated. But we often overlook the fact that we manipulate reality also in our own lives.” http://sobadsogood.com/2014/09/17/daughter-fools-family-friends-photoshops-her-entire-holiday/?fb_action_ids=10204427026457166&fb_action_types=og.comments accessed October 2014

I enjoyed viewing the images from Molly Macindoe and felt that she projected the atmosphere of the festival to the viewers of the magazine. She states in her blurb that some of the people are people that she is involved with in another project.


http://py-zine.com/post/96212793643/photographer-molly-macindoe-presents-her-exclusive


References



Hido, Todd (2014) on landscapes, interiors and the Nude, aperture publishing, New York P20

http://sobadsogood.com/2014/09/17/daughter-fools-family-friends-photoshops-her-entire-holiday/?fb_action_ids=10204427026457166&fb_action_types=og.comments accessed oct 2014

Bibliography


Powell, M (2014) Sails Ahoy, Good Taste the magazine from  Select 
Lincolnshire, Autumn/Winter 2014, Issue 20, Warners, Bourne (Photographs possibly Andrew Tryner)